Wednesday, June 3, 2009

why do you think Elie Wiesel wrote this book? He wrote this book to tell the world how they treated the Jews and punish and that really happen is not a lie and plus he wrote to tell people to not repeat the same thing that they did to the Jews and he wrote to tell people to never do that because is a mark for life.

153 why do you think he chose night as its tittle? He choose it has his tittle because everything was dark for him and the Jews at that time they only live a bad life and suffer and there was no hope for them and proabably that rescue never came for them so it always was dark with no hope at all for them.

154 How does Elie change as a result of his experiences in the concetration camps? He changes by having nigthmares everynight rebembering and dreaming about the camps and how his parents died and other people.

155 How does finally come to terms with his ordeal?( What does he finally do?) He writes the story telling how it was for the Jews and lets everithing he knows and experince at this book he made.

156 The one issued in Night that's still going on his genocide in Africa is that people are killing other because they are not the same as each other ar the

Monday, May 18, 2009

The diary of Anne Frank question pg 832 and pg 870

1 Respond: The families must obey strict rules to avoid discovery. Which rules would be hardest for you to follow? Why? The most hard rule for me to follow will be stay inside the house all day because i get crazy and really mad when i stay in the house and i will probably will walk out the door because i cannot stay in one place for a long time.



2 (a) recall : In scene 1, what objects does Mr. Frank find in the secret room ? (b) How are these objects connected with the rest of the act? Mr Frank finds a diary in the secret room and gives it to Anne and well this goes with the rest of the act because Anne writes whats happening and how is her life she writes all this down in the diary.



3 (a) Recall What special meaning does Hanukkah have for the families? (b) Deduce: What do Anne presents show about her? (c) Intercept Why do the others react with enthusiasm to their parents? Hanukkah special meaning is that is that is families religion they all united that day and they give each other presents. Anne presents show that she cares about them and celebrates Hanukkah. They act like that with their parents because they are probably mad and annoyed to be stuck in the house with out going outside and that's why they act like that.



4 (a) Evaluate with a partner , discuss Mr. Frank's statement , "there are . . . no locks that anyone can put on your mind." How does Anne prove that is true? (b) Discuss: share your answer with a a partner and then with the rest of the class. She explains by giving reasons and explaining why there is no locks that anyone can put you.



5 (a) What is the Historical cause that forces the Franks to go into hiding? (b) What effects does this situation have on their daily lives? The Franks have to hide because the Nazis are looking for the Jews to kill them and make them suffer well the Franks are Jews and they don't wanna died so that's why they went into hiding. This affects their daily life's by they can go outside for nothing they have to be full time hiding in their place they cannot make noise for hours and hours plus they can open the window and they dont have enought supplies or food so that makes ther lifes suffer.



6 In scene 2, Anne and Peter discuss the stars of David on their clothes. (a) What effects do the Nazis intend the wearing of the stars to have on the Jews? (b) What background information about the war and the Nazis' treament of the Jews helps you link this cause with its intended effects? They talk about the star and how is precious to have and the history and the meaning of the star of David. The Nazis are gonna kill anybody that has the star of David in their clothes our where it. The Nazis treated the jews like slaves and make them work and kill them it show that the Nazis really hated the Jews.



7 Dialogue reveals character and relationships

Advances the action of the plot

Develops the conflict





8 After Mr. Kraler asks if Jan Dussel can join the Franks and the Van Daans in hidding , what does does the dialogue among the characters reveal about their personalities? It show that the Franks say yes he could joing in the hidding place and that the Van Daans say no and they where selfhish and only care about them and well that where some of the personalities that where shown in the story and both of families that live in the hidding place.



Question pg 870



1what do you like best about Anne Frank? How would you like having her as a friend? I like about Anne that she knows how to keep herself entertain while she is hiding and can make noice and she finds ways like writing in her journal or reading a book. I would like to have her as a friend by the way she understand the problems you have and she will help you one way to solve them.



2 (a) Recall : what disturbing news does Mr. Kraler bring on New Years day? (b) connect what hint does this give about the ending of play? Mr Kraler news where that if they had space for another Jew because he cannot find a place where he can go the only place was where the Franks live and they say yes there is room for him. The hint of end of the play is that there was not allot food left and they only had a little tickes to buy food and the VAnn Dam family where fighting with the Franks.

3 (a) Recall What is the span of act ii? (b) Interpret how have the characters changed since the end of act 1? The span of act in 2 is that they been hiding for 2 years without seen the sun or taking a fresh hair breath and when finally there gonna make it someone snitches on them and they get send to concentrated camps and well i guess they died. B The characters changed by like their moods they went from been happy in act1 till been mad and depress and some love was included in act 2 that how they changed. c Anne change she fell in love with Peter and well now she has feelings for him.

4 (a) Draw conclusion How can Anne believed that in spite of everything people are really good in heart? (b) Intercept what does Mr Frank mean when he says she put means to shame?
she put that sentence because people are really good but they don't express t or show it because for reasons. He says that because he knows and has more experience and seen that people are not always good and well that's it.

5 for each of the following events identify one cause and one effect (a) Mrs Van Daan decision to steal food? Mrs frank change of heart about wanting the Van Daans to leave she thinks that his not fair and THAT HE HIS SORRY FOR EATING THE FOOD AND THAT IS TRUE HE NEEDS TO EAT but he he wont do it againg.

Tuesday, May 12, 2009

fifty things i know about the holocaus

1 I learn that the Nazis made killing centers to kill the Jews.

2 I learn that the first killing camp was Chelmno that open in Warthegu in December of 1941

3 The SS killed like 1526500 Jews in march 1942 till November 1943 they kill.

4 Ghetto was organized by the Jewish and started in the 1516.

5 the biggest ghettos where in Poland they where called Warsaw there was 4000000jews where crowed in a area of 1.3 square miles

6 i learn that all the Jews that enter the camps in that second they where killed.

7 The SS keep the killing center of the Jews in secret did tell people.

8 I learn that the Nazis had a star in their close so they could no they are not Jews.

9 I learn that police officer use baby's as shooting targets.

10 I learn that they made ovens to kill the Jews in the ovens burn to death.

11 the Nazis also kill other groups for racial things and more.

12 The Jews did get food to eat at all only a piece of bread and soup made off shoe laze.

13 The Nazis tested experiments with the Jews like surgeries and medicine and more.

14 They did something to the women so they don't have more kids because the don't want more Jews.

15 The Jews also had to work for the Nazis by making tranches.

16 The guys that like guys and where Jews they where killed.

17 The handicaps that where Jews where killed no matter what.

18 The Nazis made the Jews work to death.

19 The Jews fell in love in the camps so yea they fell in love.

20 The Jews did not had pace to sleep because they where all crowed together.

21 Some times the Jews died because they where to crowed together and stuck did not have air.

22 They had curfews and laws saying you could this and what you cannot do.

23 The Jews had different bathrooms and water fountains from the Nazis they where separated.

24 In the 1933 the Jews population was 9 million in Europe.

25 In the final months of war the SS did a death march.

26 kids at age 12 and they where Jewish they where put to work hard.

27 the people help the Jews hide those people where killed.

28 Hitler had this all plan out and knew what he was doing.

29 Hitler also wrote his own book saying about his idea and was one of the best selling books.

30 There is a book written by a Jew that survey in the camp.

31 6000 thousand where gas's to death the Jews.

32 when the girls when to camp they had to cut all their hair from their head.

33 there was three types of ghettos first close ghettos second open ghettos and last destruction ghettos.

34 I learn that the Germans destroyed the ghettos in 1941

35 the Germans forbade anybody that's a Jew to have a education in the ghetto.

36 the Germans most deported the Hungarian Jews to Auschwitz killing center.

37 In two ghettos there was like 90,000 Jews living.

38 the Jews star was a 6 point star.

39 The Germans where the 5 point star

40 after the Jews survivors feared to return to their former houses because they where scared.

41 Hitler was one of the great speakers.

42 Hitler wife kill herself and though is husband will join her but he did not.

43 Hitler join world war 1

44 Hitler did not like girls that where makeup.

45 Hitler got kick out of art class.

46 Hitler never took off his coat in front off people.

47 Hitler like the circus.

48 i learn that the DP was close in 1957.

49 The pope is still now it work with Hitler.

50 Hitler had a sister named wolf she was mental retarded and the end Hitler kill himself then they where going to catch them and the only thing they found of Hitler was his toilet sit and was sold for allot of money.

Friday, May 8, 2009

street problem

The problems in the streets that I seen gangbanging because this gang bangers are in the blocks scaring the people that walk threw the street. Second this gang bangers start shooting people or the other gang bangers that they don’t like or get along with each other and kill. Third is these people be selling drugs or guns to people even kids and that’s bad for kids to learn or to take it affects there health plus something they be telling the kids to join the gang and the kids join the gang most of the time they do join the gang. These are some reasons that are problems in the streets and we need to fix them.

First reason we can stop gang banging in the streets is by having more police in the streets and those cops that look like normal people but there not they are detectives. With this service on the street most likely that gang bangers are going to get a little scared and stop being in the streets that at least gives peace to the people and kids that live in the area. Plus with more cops in the streets they can capture the gang bangers and put them in jail. Each time that passes with the gang bangers been lock up in jail and more cops in the streets less violence there’s going to be.


Second reason these gang bangers be shooting people and others gang in the streets some reason they always get guns and weapons from some place or another. One way we could solve this problem is by checking every house to see who has guns second this time they should make it hard to get a gun. By when you want to buy a gun you have to have this type of id card and they have to find information off you like where you live and what are your hobbies and see your pass and check if you ever got in trouble with the law. Last thing is that they need too make harder to get bullets for guns because without bullets the gun is useless.


Third reason is that gang bangers be selling drugs and guns to kids and plus something they be asking them to join there gang. One way we could stop this is by sending special people that work in the police department to go as a gang banger while time passes he slowly captures one by one of the gang bangers. Then he finds the way how they get those drugs and well capture them all at the same time. The kids and teenagers that turn gang bangers their parents should send them to another place or country or send them to boot camp. This is the way we could keep our streets safe and calm and controlled it.


This are the problems in the streets is called gang bangers that they scared people, and sell drugs and kill people so what you thing we should do to stop gang bangers from harming the streets and people???

Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Hansel and Gretel

My named is Hansel well i am the boy well my family is poor and don't have money to buy us food for me and my sister her named is Gretel one night my parents where talking in their room but i was awake so i heard their conversation of them planing to leave us in the forest and get rid of us i say to my self this parents are the worst in the world and crazy. So the next day came well i knew was going to happen so i grad some shinning rocks and put them in my pocket well they where saying allot of stuff to us and gave us some bread to eat when we get hungry so i grab the shinning rocks and threw them in the floor and mark my trail so i can go home mu my dad and step mom did not knew i was marking the trail so i was one step ahead of them. We finally got to the forest well they lighted some fired for us to warm they say to wait but i knew there where going to leave us there so i was not dumb so when the night came and the shinning moon spark in the sky i told my sister to wake up aCheck SpellingNd lets go home i was smiling because i say to myself they thought there going to fool me i know what was happening so i was prepare for anything we follow the rocks and finally go home my dad open the door he was surprised and the same time he was kinda mad that we found the way to come home but my step mom was really surprised she was like lying saying by did you fell asleep in the forest but i was ignoring her so i when up to my room to try to sleep but again i had a weird feeling it was true my parents again where going to take us again to the forest and this time for good they where going to get rid off us so again i try to when outside to Colet more rocks to mark the trail again but they lock the door so cannot get rocks so i was like saying god help us !!! find are way home. The next day came they woke us hope in the morning and say lets go again to the forest and find more wood so we did but this time they gave us a little piece of bred since i did not had no more rocks to mark the trail i use little pieces of bread to mark the path so i did we go to the forest but this time it was more deeper and harder to find the way home they set up a fired again and say wait Will be back where going to get some fired wood so again they same thing happen but one thing when wrong the path i made to go back home the birds ate it all and the path was gone i did no how to come home again. I told my sister sooner or later will find the way home we walk 2 hour's and nothing we where more lost then ever into we found this house made of food and candy we ran to it and started to eat it all up t was yummy and tasty then the owner of that house came out to see Wat's happening she saw us and grad our hands and told us she ain't gonna harm us at all so we went inside her house she gave us allot of food to eat and 2 beds where there so we went to sleep for a while. Next thing you know that old lady was which and was going to eat me she put me in a cage and told my sister to cook and cook so i cant get more fatter so i was eating and more i got really fat my sister was crying because she was getting ready the hot pot to cook me but then my sister got smart and ask that which is the oven big enough for him she say of course look even fit there the which but her head in the oven well my sister push her in and well she was burn to death. My sister got the keys and open the cage i was free we look all over the house for stuff we found jewels and some value stuff we where happy because finally we got rid of the which and had some stuff to sell to get some money. Finally we found our home and well my dad was there he was happy to see us and he say that are step mother died i was happy because i did not like her at all everything was normal again and finally i could rest and live happy.

Monday, May 4, 2009

O Henry

One Dollar's Worth this story is about a rattle snake is not a animal is a person well that was working for the judge well he work for the judge for years then something happen the judge did something to him well he his mad and his going to get his revenge.This story is very good has action and emotion going on and talks allot about how one person wants to get revenge and well the other person does not care because he thinks he ain't going to do nothing to him and he always gets does letters. Well at the end of this story the rattle snake died . Well this story ends by saying well the person that wants to get revenge well ended up diedying .




The gift of the Magi this story is about how to couple well try to find one way or another to buy each other a present for Christmas they finally do but they had to sacrifice one thing they value they guy his watch and the girl her long beautiful hair at the end well they felt bad i guess and maybe Little good. Well this story is mainly about to couples to buy each other a present no matter the coast. In the story it has allot of feeling and emotion from bad and good. This story is a good one and is mostly about feelings and emotion.


Tuesday, April 28, 2009

kate chopin

I think of the story of an hour that talks about how the women wish to be death to be free from her husband well she did not died. Instead of her dying her husband dieds that Wat the people told her well she was feeling freedom because her husband treat her bad and well his death just gave her to be free again. The author talks about how does it feel when your free from something that's always stopping you and when you get to the point of getting something there something that comes back and stops you. so that's what i think about this story and well that's my opinion of freedom.

I think about the blind man story that is kinda bogus for blind people because in the story nobody helps the blind or buys him a pencil. They all ignore him and hide from him and even the police almost arrest him because he was telling something to those kids that try to steel his pencils. Well they all see that he blind is waking down the street hungry and walking in the sun nobody tells him to cross the other side of the street where there is no sun. At the end well this famous guy in the city gets hit my 2 cars and dieds then everybody comes to see the accident and help him and they could not believed that some one famous died. the story shows that if you rich people will matter Wat happens to you but if you poor they don't care about you.

The last story Desiree's baby well is basically about racism because the husband thinks that his wife is black and well he don't like that so he sends her back to her house wit her mother and family to live with them. An plus in the story well they had slave working on their houses . An basically she was not black and result that he was black well i guess he did not believed but there was the true in the letter her mom wrote to his father saying that she was black. So this story talks about how racism was treated back then and how it felt for the people that where color.

Friday, April 24, 2009

Dr. Heidegge's Experiment

Write down your observations on this experiment ?

Well this experiment i just did by using the fountain of youth to make 4 old people young well i notice that the fountain did work it made them young i ask them a question what you gonna change when you turn young again they did not say nothing and they just drank the water in couple of hours they turn young again but they wanted to drink more water so i gave then another glass. When they finally turn young well they still where the same when they where young women girl was acting like a loose women by flirty with those 3 guys and making them jealous so i notice that nothing change on her she is still a loose women. The other guy was still a hustler and a flirt with the girls well he did not change at all he was acting like the old times. The 2 guy was a drunk still he was drinking and he did not change at all. Finally we got the last guy he is a big jerk h is still trying to find out how can he take money away from people so nothing had change in him. Another thing i noticed in this experiment is that when they look in the mirror they look old so basically that fountain of youth is not good because i just experience that you could turn young but still you wont make no changes you still going to the same thing you did the last time you where young.

Thursday, April 23, 2009

Desiree baby the sequad

I think that Armand is going to hide the letter of that his mother say that she is black and he is going to burn that letter or hide it somewhere where nobody cant find it after he does that. He is going to go find his wife and kid and act good and say sorry and his wife probably going to say to go away that she don't accept his apologies then he is going to feel really sad and probably do something dumb or tell the true to is wife that he is black and tell her to come back to the house an say that everything is going to change and that he was acting dumb and he sorry then his wife is going o come back to the house. Then he probably going to treat the slaves he has working more better because that's his race and color and he is going to pay them better and take care of them and then all the stuff he burn that was things of his wife and kid he is going to lie and say that he gave it away to other people because he wanted to forget about them but then he is going to buy everything new again for his wife and child. Then he is going to try to find out how did his mother died and why he is going to go and search information of more about his mother history and family of her to see if she still has some family that are alive and ask them about his mother history. Then Desiree Mon is going to tell the true that she is not her daughter and she could never had a kid and that the true is that she found her in her property and that child was her and well she raised that child that is you and then Desiree is going to go and try to find out who is her real mother. That's what going to happen in the story.

Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Flowers for Algernon

If you were given a choice to have an operation that would make you much smarter would you do it especially if you know the effects of the surgery would only be temporary ? why or why not use examples from the story



In the story i am dumb and treated bad by some of my friends and people and i cannot work because i don't know how to read or write If i had the choice of having a operation to become smart temporary i would take it and become smart and since i am smart i could get a good job that pay me good money and save that money and live good at least i be happy and enjoy live by understanding wat happening and not been dumb and well that's a chance i could write a journal telling how was my life and how did i feel. Then i would try to make a cure for me because since i am smart temporary so i have a brain has a genius i could try to make a medicine or something to help me live longer and make me smart not dumb. The surgery might effect me more but i know for a fact that i would enjoy some of my life and at least tell world that one day i was smart and it felt good then when i become dumb i will use that money i save working while i was smart so i can live at least a normal live i guess then tell someone to read my journal so i can at least try to remember how was smart i was and other people can read it. Then i try to do another surgery to become smart again if it works it works but if i does not work well i know for a fact that one time i was smart then that's it.

Friday, April 17, 2009

Curious case of benjamin button chapter 8-to end

Family: I learn that family treated you bad when you are younger and older because they think you don't know anything or have much power of saying. The other way i learn in family is sometimes they don't care about you or take care of you like in the story the son told his young father to do that and act this way and did not accepted him that way he was. third thing i learn is that when you get older or younger they don't take of you they pay a babysitter or put you in old people house to take of you and only visit you when they can. That's what i learn about family in this story.

Age: In the story age does matter if your old they treated you like he is ugly and in the story like he was born old he did not like to play with toys or eat baby food instead he read encyclopedias and smoke. Then when he got like in the 30 and 25 they treated him with respect and admired him he got the collage girls and parties and he did not like his wife because she was old and not attractive or like to party. The age younger he got they lost there respect form him even his son did not longer respect him he did not had power of saying or doing stuff. Age in the story does matter and makes a difference how people treated you and behave.

Beauty: In the story beauty matter's because when he was born old people where scared of him and treated him like if he was a monster and doctors run away when they saw him. Since he started to get more younger and that meant he strated to look more younger and beauty they forgot when he was just born that he was old then he attract the young girls of collage and of course in the story show if your married and your wife or husband are old you loose interest of him or she. Then last in story show when you hit the age when your a baby basically they hired a Nana to take care of you because they don't have time or don't want to.

Thursday, April 16, 2009

The curious case of Benjamin button 3-7

After reading chapter 3-7 predict three problems you think Benjamin will encounter an give your solution for each ( skip a line)

1 I predict Benjamin is making a big mistake of leaving his son that is 14 years old ?? Then the same thing is his son going to do when has a son and leave him instead of ignoring his son he should change that mistake so when his son has a kid does not ignore him.

2 I predict more younger he becomes he is going to leave his wife for a much younger and his age i predict that because his wife is no more attractive and she don't like parties or to go too dance club's so he is going to get tired of her and leave her and live his young life.

3 My last prediction is when he died's he is going to died happy because he felt the young life and
well enjoy life he thought that he was going to get more old but instead he got more young and did stuff so yea when he dieds he proably is not going to feel pain because he is going to died as a baby .

Wednesday, April 15, 2009

THE CURIOUS CASE OF BENJAMIN BUTTON CHAPTER 2

Roger is so overly concerned with how Benjamin looks and is worried about what people are going to say. what should he do ? I think he should go with the plan and put the old kid in a house where old people go so they can take care of him and then visit him every weak and then well slowly time passes well you will get rid off him and then he should move to another state or country and leave him at the old people house and well start a new life and fresh.

THE CURIOUS CASE OF BENJAMIN BUTTON CHAPTER 1

what would you have done if you were Roger Button chapter 1?
If i was Roger Button i will tell the people that my son died and then my great grampa came to visit me and he also got sick an he was in the same hospital my son died they did not have clothes for my great grampa so he got to be cover with a blanket and we where waking to the store to buy him some clothes and a cane and my son died so i am going to make a funeral for my son some come next weak and well that's what i will do if i was Roger Butoon.

Monday, April 13, 2009

The magic city

Magic is power lights are cities
Imaginations are magic determination form cities
Dust is magic and buildings are cities
People make magic by forming new cities
In the past cities where not made or magic
time pass and people started to use their imagination to form a magic city
it took years to make there dreams come true
Benjamin Franklin came and made lights and that gave spark of magic on buildings
Peoples dreams had come true their magic city was form
All the world has a magic city from poor to rich but there is a city
At the magic city anything goes from parties to jobs
People when they go to the city they go dress in style
The magic city is always expensive when you go make sure you take your money
Famous people live at the city
At night is the magic city cause of all the lights that spark in buildings and streets
Combined together this made the magic city.

Monday, March 30, 2009

A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words


It's was one day it was a summer season a afternoon i was the family member that died i just always came to see my family because i miss them a lot. I saw them sad and well my son Brian was hungry all the time because he always like to eat non stopping and my other son Robin seen sad since the day i died because he did not spent allot of time with me because i was in the civil war defending the country. My daughter Gabriela always like animals and her favorite animal was a horse she always want to feed the horse but her mom would not let her because she was afraid that the horse will attack her or bite but my daughter Gabriela always got mad because they would not let her feed the horse or get close at it.



I saw my mother she was old she was slicing bread like always that keep her busy and she was pretty healthy because she still was alive for her age she was always happy because she like life. My wife Sonia was a really busy person since the day i died because she had to do farm work since we did not had allot of money she could not hired workers to work on are land but she was smart since she saw that she could not work in all the land by herself she rented it to people she always had to do something like take care of the kids and take them to school so she had work non stopping in the house too. The place where we live was a big wooden house and we had a big farm to with a lot of animals my graveyard was like two blocks from the place where my family live so it was for me closed to visit them i just fly to blocks and enter the house to see my family.



The thing i always forget to talk about his are dog he is a cute strong dog and he always take care of the family by chancing away the robbers or people that try to steel stuff in the farm he was like the angel of the family. The house always smell like yummy food and pie and more i always like the smell but the bad thing is that i cannot eat because i am a ghost but just my smelling the food i felt like i was eating to. The day afternoon i got scared because my daughter Gabriela almost saw me and the law of a ghost is that if they see you then you can not longer get out of the graveyard so she almost saw me and i got scared and left the house really fast. Next time i go visit my family i have to be more careful so they cannot see me.

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Pet peeves

1touch my hair
2 loud noises
3 people that talk to much
4 when i am in a car an there traffic
5 people touch your stuff with out permission
6 waiting in line
7 going to the hospital
8 I don't like lyers
9 I don't like the smell of fish
10 When they turn of my music off
11 When they ask me to much question
12 I don't like to sleep early
13 I don't like jealous people
14 I don't like to go too summer school
15 I don't like to walk allot
16 I don't like when they wake me up early in the mornings
17 I hate people snore
18 I hate people that are drunk in party
19 I don't like when people brag allot
20 I don't like people that treat you like if you where dumb
21 I don't like people that think they no more then you and always say your wrong
22 I hate when my computer goes slow
23 I hate to much homework
24 I hate to be in my house all day
25 I hate when my parents don't let me go outside or to the store or be with my friends

Monday, March 23, 2009

The secret

It was my best friend dippiest darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep it was one day that we where in the park playing soccer an one of my friend told me a secret about that when he was a little boy his dad died and that the dad he has is not his real dad is a step father and he told me to not tell anybody and i say don't worry i will keep the secret. Weeks pass and i have not told nobody his secret it was going well and my friend trust me more because he saw that i keep secret and was a real good friend he told me then he strated to tell me more and more secrets and i knew more stuff. One day i was talking to my other friends and suddenly i almost toll him my friend secret about that his dad is not his dad he is just a step father and that his real dad died but i remember what he say to keep it a secret so i did not say nothing.

One day i was with my other best friend in the house playing some videos games in the xbox we strated talking and talking and eventually i told him about my best friend secret about his dad how he died and the dad was not his real one that he has a step dad my best friend went and told my other friend's. Eventually my best friend found out that i told his secret because my other friends where talking about it we where no more friends but like enemies for a long time. Then i went a say sorry to him by telling him his secret about his dad and other secrets he told me about his girlfriend and more that i told my friends and then he accepted the sorry but this time he did not trust me allot and did not tell me his secrets no more but for me it was good that he did not told me his secret because there where hard to keep. The best thing to do when you have a best friend is not telling them all your secrets because you never no when they can tell your secret to another person.

The secret

It was my best friend dippiest darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep it was one day that we where in the park playing soccer an one of my friend told me a secret about that when he was a little boy his dad died and that the dad he has is not his real dad is a step father and he told me to not tell anybody and i say don't worry i will keep the secret. Weeks pass and i have not told nobody his secret it was going well and my friend trust me more because he saw that i keep secret and was a real good friend he told me then he strated to tell me more and more secrets and i knew more stuff. One day i was talking to my other friends and sudenly i almost toll him my friend secret abou that his dad is not his dad he is just a step father and that his real dad died but i rembember what he say to keep it a secret so i did not say nothing.

Thursday, March 19, 2009

Her mystorious death

Her death was due to mysterious circumstance I was assigned to the case. It was one day that i was in vacation at Ecuador 10/3/94 i receive a phone call at 3:55 pm from a well know customer that always had my service because he pay good money and i was a detective he say that he Had a little job for me to solve the death of his wife Maria because he contact allot of detectives but non had solve his mystery and he had fate that i could solve his mystery. That day i pack all my stuff and left Ecuador and i was on my way to New York city Queens i arrived their 10/3/94 where he live and the house his wife died he receive me with a big party with important people at that party we discuss how much money i was going to get pay and he offer me 2 million dollars just enough to live a long live without working and i accepted the offer he say i start next weak so he just say lets celebrate with some beer so we did and next weak i started to work for him so he call his guard an brought like 20 cases fill with money i was really happy to see all that money but i knew i had to work hard and solve that case. The day came i got my tools all ready and help from my best friend Oscar i also pay him good money and plus i took some body guards in case somebody try kill me because i had that much money on me we arrived at the house 10/11/94 at 7:00 am and the boss was outside opening the gates to let me in with my guards.





The boss left the house he say he will be back that he is going to leave the house to me for 3 Weeks so he gave me the keys and plus a tip he left with his trucks and guards so i Had the whole house to search with no problems my friend Oscar was amazed to see a big house with allot of values he was excited but i told him we are not hear to see or take a break we are in a mission and he say OK so we look at the room she died in it was a big room that had a pool in it and sharp things like some swords and collections of pocket knifes and paintings of expense artist work. I collected all the swords took them to my lavatory check fro DNA and found that the boss had hold them before and his wife DNA also had hold the swords but did not had blood on them so i put the swords back i took some of the water of the pool and got DNA results it seem that his wife was swimming in the pool with her husband that was my boss because the DNA show that he was in the pool with her and the water has not been change so i found some information important that my boss was there with her wife so i started to think his husband kill her but i was like Na because why he will want to know who kill his wife.

Two weeks past still no information i got the only think i found it is about the pool bu then i say to my self to check all the paintings there where like hundred of painting but one was really big and heavy i need it 10 body guards to remove the big painting of a painting of his wife. There was a small door that had like a lock in it so i opened it using special tools it took me like 5 hours i finally opened it and found a letter with a gun and the letter said the reason i kill my wife is because she was kissing another guy and cheating on him so that night when they finish been in the pool he took out the gun and shoot her in the head and burn her body so nobody can find it and the sins of the burned are in a jar that looks like a cookie jar so ran down the kitchen and found a jar open it and it was smelling and the burned body sins where there so actually the boss kill her then i say to myself he is sick man to do that. He was in the back of me with a evil smile pointing me with a gun and saying the words well you solve the mystery and now is time you also leave this world and i was like saying your a sick man he say nothing and the my friend Oscar shoot him in the harm and well he drop the gun too the floor and then i call the police and i solve the mystery and well i show the evidence to the police who kill his wife and i told them he kill his own wife hear the proof the letter that say that and the gun he use and plus the sins of his wife in a cookie jar. I solved the case my boss ended at jail for the rest of his life because he kill his own wife and then he was crazy why will you kill your own wife and then try to figure out who kill her so he was sick and plus i had the 2 million dollars and well now the mission ended is time to celebrate.