Monday, March 23, 2009

The secret

It was my best friend dippiest darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep it was one day that we where in the park playing soccer an one of my friend told me a secret about that when he was a little boy his dad died and that the dad he has is not his real dad is a step father and he told me to not tell anybody and i say don't worry i will keep the secret. Weeks pass and i have not told nobody his secret it was going well and my friend trust me more because he saw that i keep secret and was a real good friend he told me then he strated to tell me more and more secrets and i knew more stuff. One day i was talking to my other friends and suddenly i almost toll him my friend secret about that his dad is not his dad he is just a step father and that his real dad died but i remember what he say to keep it a secret so i did not say nothing.

One day i was with my other best friend in the house playing some videos games in the xbox we strated talking and talking and eventually i told him about my best friend secret about his dad how he died and the dad was not his real one that he has a step dad my best friend went and told my other friend's. Eventually my best friend found out that i told his secret because my other friends where talking about it we where no more friends but like enemies for a long time. Then i went a say sorry to him by telling him his secret about his dad and other secrets he told me about his girlfriend and more that i told my friends and then he accepted the sorry but this time he did not trust me allot and did not tell me his secrets no more but for me it was good that he did not told me his secret because there where hard to keep. The best thing to do when you have a best friend is not telling them all your secrets because you never no when they can tell your secret to another person.

1 comment:

  1. I like your story but put more effort on it for example add more detail on why you told your other friend...

    You could make it better on how or why did you told your other friend..
    *Dalia*

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