Monday, March 30, 2009

A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words


It's was one day it was a summer season a afternoon i was the family member that died i just always came to see my family because i miss them a lot. I saw them sad and well my son Brian was hungry all the time because he always like to eat non stopping and my other son Robin seen sad since the day i died because he did not spent allot of time with me because i was in the civil war defending the country. My daughter Gabriela always like animals and her favorite animal was a horse she always want to feed the horse but her mom would not let her because she was afraid that the horse will attack her or bite but my daughter Gabriela always got mad because they would not let her feed the horse or get close at it.



I saw my mother she was old she was slicing bread like always that keep her busy and she was pretty healthy because she still was alive for her age she was always happy because she like life. My wife Sonia was a really busy person since the day i died because she had to do farm work since we did not had allot of money she could not hired workers to work on are land but she was smart since she saw that she could not work in all the land by herself she rented it to people she always had to do something like take care of the kids and take them to school so she had work non stopping in the house too. The place where we live was a big wooden house and we had a big farm to with a lot of animals my graveyard was like two blocks from the place where my family live so it was for me closed to visit them i just fly to blocks and enter the house to see my family.



The thing i always forget to talk about his are dog he is a cute strong dog and he always take care of the family by chancing away the robbers or people that try to steel stuff in the farm he was like the angel of the family. The house always smell like yummy food and pie and more i always like the smell but the bad thing is that i cannot eat because i am a ghost but just my smelling the food i felt like i was eating to. The day afternoon i got scared because my daughter Gabriela almost saw me and the law of a ghost is that if they see you then you can not longer get out of the graveyard so she almost saw me and i got scared and left the house really fast. Next time i go visit my family i have to be more careful so they cannot see me.

3 comments:

  1. nice job klever
    but i think you could it done better

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  2. I like your story its nice..
    *Dalia*

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  3. good story i don't get it are u the man that is stending on the back of the room

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